William Hope Hodgson's The Finding of the 'Graiken,' Explained: A Detailed Summary and Literary Analysis
- Michael Kellermeyer
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Before you read on, be warned that the introductory notes to this story will contain spoilers…
Like “From the Tideless Sea”—and so many of Hodgson’s other tales—“The Finding of the Graiken” concerns a Manly Man doing what Manly Men do: namely rescuing Damsels in Distress, breaking the law, assaulting weaker-willed men, killing monsters, and not giving a good goddamn. Published just two weeks before his marriage to the “not at all good-looking” Bessie Farnworth, the story appeared as Hodgson was inching closer to having an actual, real-life relationship with a woman to whom he was not related.
Even so, he remained no closer to mastering female characterization than he had been in his bachelor years—nor would he ever, despite his affectionate but companionate marriage. Accordingly, the story drips with machismo and wish-fulfillment.
A year after his fiancée disappears in the Sargasso Sea, a brawny adventurer hijacks his friend’s yacht and—after only the barest effort to justify his sanity—launches a desperate rescue mission. The tale contains many of Hodgson’s familiar plot elements: the lady’s ship has been dismasted in a storm and ensnared in the sargassum; ever since, the crew and passengers have been besieged by ravenous octopi, prompting them to erect a canvas “superstructure” for protection; all the men are frightened, helpless, or indecisive except for the Hero; and the Damsel—a submissive, worshipful, yet strong-spirited maiden—remains the gleaming symbol of civilization itself: attacked by merciless Nature, resisting bravely, but rapidly running out of time and in desperate need of a Hero to save, protect, and preserve her.
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Once the Hero arrives on the scene, his bullying bravado is rewarded when the yacht improbably locates the beleaguered Graiken (a nonsense word that happens to rhyme suggestively with “kraken”) after only a brief survey of the Sargasso’s ship graveyard—a remarkable feat given that the Sargasso Sea covers roughly two million square miles.
What follows is an unmistakable homage to the most famous episode in Jules Verne’s Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea: the battle with the giant squid. It is worth noting, too, that one of the chapters in Verne’s novel, “The Sargasso Sea,” has the Nautilus sail beneath the gyre’s dense mats of seaweed, where the protagonists witness a weed-choked graveyard of derelict vessels. Hodgson would repurpose and popularize this image, transforming Verne’s speculative wonder into a setting of cosmic menace and maritime horror.
“The Finding of the Graiken,” then, is part Homeric rescue tale—recalling St. George saving the princess from the dragon or Perseus rescuing Andromeda from the sea monster—and part affectionate tribute to Jules Verne. The result is one of Hodgson’s most unabashedly romantic adventures: a fantasy of masculine heroism, supernatural intuition, and chivalric devotion played out against one of the strangest and most haunting landscapes in all weird fiction.
SUMMARY
Narrated by an unnamed yachtsman, our present tale follows his friend Ned Barlow’s seemingly irrational quest to rescue the crew of a ship long presumed lost.
The story begins a year after the disappearance of the full-rigged ship Graiken. The vessel vanished without a trace after a final signal from the Azores, and most people have abandoned hope of finding her. Yet the narrator knows that his close friend, Ned Barlow, still secretly believes she survives. Barlow’s devotion is understandable: aboard the Graiken sailed the woman he loved. Though he rarely speaks of her, the narrator senses that “still Barlow hoped,” despite the passing months.
At this time, the narrator unexpectedly inherits a fortune from his uncle, including a large yacht. Delighted by the prospect of a long voyage, he decides to invite Barlow along, believing a sea journey might improve his friend’s declining health. To his surprise, Barlow reacts with intense enthusiasm. When the narrator mentions going to sea, Barlow springs up excitedly and immediately agrees to join him.
Once the voyage begins, however, the narrator becomes increasingly troubled. Barlow behaves strangely. He speaks little, spends most of his time among the crew, and demonstrates an unexpectedly sophisticated knowledge of navigation. His behavior grows so peculiar that the narrator begins to wonder whether grief has damaged his friend’s mind.
The mystery deepens when Captain Jenkins reports that someone has been secretly tampering with the yacht’s compasses. The captain insists the culprit understands navigation and suspects Barlow. The narrator angrily rejects the accusation, but privately he cannot dismiss it.
About a week later, the situation abruptly worsens. The narrator awakens to find himself handcuffed in his bunk. Hearing gunshots and commotion overhead, he fears a mutiny. Soon the steward informs him that he is a prisoner and that the orders come from none other than Ned Barlow. Furious and bewildered, the narrator learns that Barlow has somehow seized control of the yacht.
Confined to his cabin, he struggles to understand his friend’s motives. Gradually he recalls a strange conversation several days earlier. Barlow had spoken incoherently about a derelict ship, a “great world of weed,” and the possibility that his lost sweetheart might still be alive. At the time, the narrator dismissed the talk as evidence of insanity. Now he realizes Barlow may genuinely believe the Graiken is trapped somewhere in the vast Sargasso Sea.
As the days pass, the yacht penetrates deeper into increasingly dense masses of floating seaweed. Through his cabin ports, the narrator observes gigantic weed banks stretching across the horizon. The atmosphere becomes eerie and oppressive. Ancient derelicts appear among the weed-choked waters, silent relics of forgotten disasters. The narrator describes the region as a “ghostly world of noiseless weed, fantastic, silent, and unbelievable.”
Eventually the yacht enters a narrow channel between towering banks of seaweed. There the narrator sights a derelict vessel. Looking through binoculars, he is astonished to read her name: Graiken. The ship has miraculously survived.
Even more astonishing, people are visible aboard. A man appears first, then a crowd, and among them the narrator recognizes a young woman. Barlow’s apparently mad obsession has been vindicated. The narrator cries out in amazement: “He was right, after all!” Yet a new horror immediately emerges.
Barlow attempts to cross the weed toward the derelict by climbing onto a plank. The dense vegetation appears solid, but as soon as he steps onto it, he begins to sink. Suddenly strange tentacles seize his leg. Sailors drag him back aboard while writhing appendages emerge from the weed around him.
Moments later the entire weed field comes alive: “The whole of the hitherto silent surface was all of a move in one stupendous undulation,” the narrator observes. Vast tentacled creatures rise from the vegetation. A sailor identifies them with a terrified cry: “Devil-fishes! Octopuses! My Lord!” The yacht narrowly escapes by cutting its mooring ropes and warping away from the advancing monsters.
The following morning, Barlow devises a rescue plan. The crew modifies one of the yacht’s lifeboats, enclosing it within a protective wooden superstructure. Armed with revolvers and cutlasses, Barlow and several sailors set out across the weed toward the stranded ship.
At first the plan seems successful. Then disaster strikes. A gigantic cephalopod erupts from beneath the weed and attacks the rescue boat. Its immense arms wrap around the craft, threatening to drag it under. The trapped men fire revolvers and slash with cutlasses, but the monster continues its assault.
Watching helplessly from his cabin, the narrator can bear no more. He smashes down his prison door, seizes an elephant gun, and rushes onto the deck. Taking command, he orders the crew to haul the boat back by its trailing rope.
When the boat reaches the yacht, the narrator fires directly into the creature’s eye. The monster lashes out with enormous tentacles, one nearly striking him. Sailors hack at the limbs with cleavers and a whale lance. After several powerful shots from the elephant gun, the beast finally dies and sinks beneath the water.
Barlow survives, but his behavior becomes even stranger. He appears dazed and detached, scarcely recognizing his friend. Then, after a period of eerie silence, he suddenly cries: “It comes! It comes!”
Looking where he points, the narrator witnesses a miracle. The immense weed masses begin slowly to separate. A broad channel of clear water opens through the Sargasso as though driven by an invisible force. The path extends all the way to the Graiken, creating a route for rescue.
The yacht immediately advances. As they approach, the narrator sees Barlow’s long-lost sweetheart standing among the survivors. After a year trapped in the weed-world, she and the crew are finally saved. At the moment of triumph, however, Barlow collapses unconscious.
During his recovery, the rescued woman recounts how the Graiken had been dismasted in a terrible storm and eventually trapped within the Sargasso. The crew survived only by fortifying the ship against repeated attacks from monstrous sea creatures.
Most mysterious of all, Barlow remembers nothing of his seizure of the yacht. The narrator concludes that his friend had been operating in some heightened mental state, perhaps guided by intuitions beyond ordinary understanding. Reflecting on the strange events, he speculates that Barlow may have become sensitive to “more subtle understandings than normal bodily and mental health allows.”
The story ends with the rescue completed, the survivors safely returned to civilization, and the narrator reconciled with his friend. Though many mysteries remain unexplained—especially how Barlow knew where to find the Graiken and why the weed opened when it did—the narrator is content to leave them unsolved, recognizing that his friend’s seemingly impossible faith ultimately saved the lives of those trapped in the dreadful heart of the Sargasso Sea.
ANALYSIS
Published in 1913, “The Finding of the Graiken” is, in many ways, a condensed reworking of 1907’s novel-length The Boats of the “Glen Carrig”. Both narratives concern a group of gallant seafarers who encounter a becalmed vessel marooned in the Sargasso Sea, besieged by ravenous weed-dwelling creatures and crewed by frightened, ineffectual sailors incapable of protecting a cluster of courageous Damsels in Distress.
The Glen Carrig is the more expansive and imaginative work—part supernatural horror, part scientific romance—and opens with its protagonists already reduced to lifeboats after the destruction of their ship. In this shorter retelling, however, the protagonists are not fellow victims struggling to survive their misfortune, but deliberate rescuers. The hero does not unexpectedly stumble upon the damsel who will hail him as her savior; he actively seeks her out.
It is tempting to see in this shift a reflection of Hodgson’s circumstances at the time of writing. Published during the very month of his marriage to a childhood acquaintance, the story injects the essentially Arthurian framework of The Glen Carrig—a tale of wandering knights-errant discovering strange adventures—with a greater sense of agency and purposeful heroism.
Like Galahad, Perseus, or St. George, Hodgson’s mariner sets out to rescue his lady-fair from the maw of the monsters assaulting her fortress. Almost preternaturally certain of her survival, and guided to her location with the confidence of a knight directed by a guardian fairy, he pursues his quest with unwavering determination.
To be fair, this supernatural certainty somewhat undermines the story’s implied realism: the notion that a ship could remain hidden for years in a two-million-square-mile sea and then be found after a relatively brief search strains credulity. Yet plausibility is hardly the point. The tale is a romance in the oldest sense of the word—a fantasy of heroic action, steadfast devotion, and triumphant rescue.
The story also reveals many of Hodgson’s recurring preoccupations. The hero’s aggressive self-confidence, willingness to seize command, and determination to prove himself recall the compensatory bravado found throughout Hodgson’s fiction. One cannot help but think of the bullied and abused cabin boy who grew into a celebrated bodybuilder, sailor, and boxer, seemingly determined to demonstrate his worth to the world.
Combined with obvious debts to Jules Verne’s Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea (wherein another Ned impulsively saves some from the clutches of a man-eating “devil fish” in a flourish of nautical machismo) and H. G. Wells’s “The Sea Raiders” (wherein a shoal of savage squid have evolved to hunt and consume hapless humans), these impulses helped transform a familiar adventure plot into one of the most memorable entries in Hodgson’s Sargasso Sea mythos.
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Hodgson may well have breathed a sigh of relief when he married at the age of thirty-five. After years of loneliness, insecurity, and restless self-fashioning, he had finally found a companion who admired him, remained devoted to him, and offered the stability that had often been absent from his life. Whatever its romantic dimensions, the marriage appears to have been one of genuine affection, friendship, and loyalty. Hodgson himself wrote to his sister:
“Betty is one of the Farnworth girls, who used to sketch me at the Technical School. We met again in Town; and now she’s Mrs. Hope. We are the same age, only a day between us. She is not at all good-looking; but we are very happy.”
The remark is revealing. Modern readers may wince at the bluntness of his assessment, yet the overall tone is unmistakably contented. One is also struck by the detail that Bessie had once sketched him at school, a fact Hodgson seems pleased to repeat.
Whether he was flattered by her youthful admiration, attracted by her loyalty, or simply grateful to have found a kindred spirit, the relationship appears to have provided an emotional security that had long eluded him.
Photographs suggest that Bessie was indeed more plain than glamorous, though hardly deserving Hodgson’s severe description. She possessed the intelligent, long-faced features of someone like Emma Thompson or Cher rather than the conventional beauty celebrated in Edwardian fiction.
For a man who had spent much of his life wrestling with insecurities born of his short stature, brutal treatment at sea, and a persistent sense of social inadequacy, such a relationship may have been especially reassuring. Whether consciously or unconsciously, many of Hodgson’s stories romanticize an idealized relationship between a heroic protector and a devoted woman whose safety depends upon his courage.
Again and again, his fiction imagines isolated settings in which the heroine is cut off from rival suitors and compelled to place her trust in a single dependable champion.
In “The Finding of the Graiken” this fantasy receives one of its purest expressions. The heroine is stranded at the edge of the known world, beset by monsters, abandoned by civilization, and sustained only by the hope that her absent champion will somehow find her.
When he finally arrives, he is vindicated in every particular: his faith is rewarded, his courage justified, and his beloved restored to him. Whether or not the story reflects Hodgson’s personal feelings about his impending marriage, it unquestionably embodies a long-cherished dream of heroic indispensability—a wish-fulfillment fantasy in which the lonely outsider becomes the celebrated savior, admired and cherished by the woman whose world he has redeemed.